Slung on
broiling tin roof,
they witter,
a timpani
while dim slim
light
bleaches them
fleshy,
'dear, you're my sweet'
'dear heart',
we whisper.
small bodies,
we throw them
onto the roof,
sweet-talk
them, recover
those that bloom.
oh, be mine, mine,
oh what heart.
I had a bit of fun writing this in the heatwave. I like thinking about rituals that we create and pass on. This one is about ripening summer fruit.
Do pop over to the TP hub and check out more poetry.
Rich with colour and sound, and fun! Love it, deeply.
ReplyDeleteThank you for the kind words, Mary. Summer does muster up these rich sorts of poems, doesn't it? I've been having so much fun lately with trying to play with language a bit, too, so I'm so grateful for the feedback.
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ReplyDeleteI enjoyed your love-song to the Tamarillo, Elizabeth.
ReplyDeleteThank you dearly, Maggie - it is a bit of a love song, isn't it? I was thinking of those candy hearts from childhood with the bold 'Be Mine' and 'Dear heart' messages. So lovely to have you pop by!
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