Small Marks

22.7.13

Tuesday Poem: Tamarillos

Slung on
broiling tin roof,

they witter,
a timpani

while dim slim
light

bleaches them
fleshy,

'dear, you're my sweet'
'dear heart',

we whisper.

small bodies,
we throw them

onto the roof,
sweet-talk

them, recover
those that bloom.

oh, be mine, mine,
oh what heart.



I had a bit of fun writing this in the heatwave. I like thinking about rituals that we create and pass on. This one is about ripening summer fruit.

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6 comments:

  1. Rich with colour and sound, and fun! Love it, deeply.

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    1. Thank you for the kind words, Mary. Summer does muster up these rich sorts of poems, doesn't it? I've been having so much fun lately with trying to play with language a bit, too, so I'm so grateful for the feedback.

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  3. I enjoyed your love-song to the Tamarillo, Elizabeth.

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    1. Thank you dearly, Maggie - it is a bit of a love song, isn't it? I was thinking of those candy hearts from childhood with the bold 'Be Mine' and 'Dear heart' messages. So lovely to have you pop by!

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